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Sudden Change (Free verse) by Dovina Hit by a hard blow of brilliant light
Paul fell from his horse
Blinded and shocked
Until understanding came
Hit by a soft blow of undeserved friendship
I fell from a high horse
Befuddled and shocked
To be led by the hand
Until understanding comes
Up the ladder:
Silencing the Silenced
Down the ladder:
strawberries
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Posted: April 20, 2005 6:01 AM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2005 6:01 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4100 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 204.110.228.254
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20-Apr-05/7:21 AM
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Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
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Dovina @ 204.250.12.246
> INTRANSIT
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20-Apr-05/7:52 AM
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Get some rest, or head for Damascus, get a load of Christians, haul them to Rome, or well, try to.
Weird how the opening line seemed long but was ironed out by fiorst line of second stanza. The last line is sheer brilliance hope they interpret it as i did (wrong or not).
There is no "wrong."
Yes there is. For instance (and this is not my, zodiac's, interpretation): This is a story about Paul Reiser being blown by Helen Hunt during an especially drunken 'Mad About You' filming and going blind.
Fine
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