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Sudden Change
(
Free verse
) by
Dovina
Hit by a hard blow of brilliant light Paul fell from his horse Blinded and shocked Until understanding came Hit by a soft blow of undeserved friendship I fell from a high horse Befuddled and shocked To be led by the hand Until understanding comes
Caducus
20-Apr-05/8:30 AM
Weird how the opening line seemed long but was ironed out by fiorst line of second stanza. The last line is sheer brilliance hope they interpret it as i did (wrong or not).
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