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To Find Peace (Free verse) by travelingsk8er
I walk through life, I carry my soul, It's heavy and dragging it, takes its toll. I want to be free from the pain I see, Want to open the door with a golden key. To a city of light I open the door, The pain my soul brings me is there no more. Walk through the threshehold, step onto the gold, My body lost feeling, its dark and cold. A man called my name, He was there in the light, Walking forward, steadily, sheilding the bright. He offered his hand, He was so holy and just, I knealt to the ground and kissed the dust. I took his hand, my mind soared as the dove, He told me my soul needed to be only loved.

Up the ladder: Honey To The Worms
Down the ladder: Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4102
Posted: November 20, 2004 7:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 7:16 PM PST
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[10] celticskatermatt1 @ 68.7.187.148 | 25-Nov-04/5:00 PM | Reply
mike this is really stupid but a
.........1212121212 thats waht u get
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