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To Find Peace (Free verse) by travelingsk8er
I walk through life, I carry my soul,
It's heavy and dragging it, takes its toll.
I want to be free from the pain I see,
Want to open the door with a golden key.
To a city of light I open the door,
The pain my soul brings me is there no more.
Walk through the threshehold, step onto the gold,
My body lost feeling, its dark and cold.
A man called my name, He was there in the light,
Walking forward, steadily, sheilding the bright.
He offered his hand, He was so holy and just,
I knealt to the ground and kissed the dust.
I took his hand, my mind soared as the dove,
He told me my soul needed to be only loved.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4116
Posted: November 20, 2004 7:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 7:16 PM PST
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.........1212121212 thats waht u get