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Sudden Change (Free verse) by Dovina

Hit by a hard blow of brilliant light Paul fell from his horse Blinded and shocked Until understanding came Hit by a soft blow of undeserved friendship I fell from a high horse Befuddled and shocked To be led by the hand Until understanding comes

Dovina 21-Apr-05/1:57 PM
There is no "wrong."




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