| Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
27-Oct-02/7:08 PM |
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This is one of those time ASCII art is needed.
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| Re: Free to Not Know Me by jsab78 |
27-Oct-02/7:05 PM |
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Rhyme very forced. Make it mean something or don't rhyme.
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| Re: Gutless by temptalia |
27-Oct-02/7:04 PM |
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ha ha love the title. I suppose being gutless you also be anusless.
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| Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w |
27-Oct-02/7:03 PM |
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If you were a boy you'd be so fucking gay. 8
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| Re: The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) by xanatos |
27-Oct-02/7:03 PM |
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I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.
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| Re: Untitled by LucidRevelation |
27-Oct-02/7:01 PM |
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gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad
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| Re: The First Poem by jrtails |
27-Oct-02/6:57 PM |
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The purpose of poetry is not even to convey *a* mood, certainly not your fucking mood. You know, this goes to show how clueless most of the poets here are. Now, since the poem is so hilarious I will assume that this is a satire of bad poets and haiku in general. 9
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| Re: untitled2 by ThreeFourSix |
27-Oct-02/6:55 PM |
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not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.
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| Re: Something in the way by nopal |
27-Oct-02/6:53 PM |
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This poem is not total garbage and I even enjoyed it.
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| Re: Gaze by AuntyM |
27-Oct-02/6:52 PM |
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Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.
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| Re: Untitled by greym0on |
27-Oct-02/6:50 PM |
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Totally excellent. Not justreadable but very interesting - I don't think I've ever read anything with much in common with this poem. Unusual sentiment.
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| Re: Nothin lasts by Mutant_X |
27-Oct-02/6:48 PM |
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Sincerity alone is almost never enough for a poem to go on - this is an exception. Excellent work, try expanding the range of subject matters which you right about - don't just write about what you most strongly feel.
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| Re: Society's Sharades by New Life Drug |
27-Oct-02/6:45 PM |
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IT'S MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE AND IT'S NOW OR NEVER - I DON'T WANNA *LIVE* FOR-EVER - I JUST WANNA LIVE WHILE I'M ALIVE.....IT'S...MY....LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
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| Re: New Hope by brazen |
27-Oct-02/6:42 PM |
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The phrase "strong as an oak" is a really annoying cliche. Try "permanent as a conifer" or something.
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| Re: Another poem by Mutant_X |
27-Oct-02/6:40 PM |
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This is like meta-angst. Pretty interesting stuff.
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| Re: glue by chinstrap |
27-Oct-02/6:39 PM |
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Yeah except for any thin paper or foil. And it's garbage for non-porous materials. And it dries rigid which makes it useless for gluing materials which are under any stresses (like wood, for instance). All your needs? You must go through a lot of fucking construction paper and glitter you fucking pansy.
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| Re: a comment on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles |
27-Oct-02/12:24 PM |
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In Amsterdam, they call it a "Royale w/ Fucknose"
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| Re: a comment on Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10 |
27-Oct-02/6:44 AM |
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Skeletor kicked he-man's ass
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| Re: why? by little_angel_maria |
27-Oct-02/12:06 AM |
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Thou dosth protest too much.
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| Re: The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle |
27-Oct-02/12:04 AM |
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