Gaze

by AuntyM

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Oct 2002 · 8 comments

Crisp October morn Sun reflects on beveled glass Rainbows to the soul

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8 comments

[9] Dariana 6-Oct-02/5:09 AM Reply

Totally in touch with these emotions.

[9] INTRANSIT 6-Oct-02/7:27 AM Reply

Good contrast, nice visuals,and that grooovy warm fuzzy feeling to boot.

[2] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/6:52 PM Reply

Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.

[10] ALChemy 23-Jan-06/2:07 PM Reply

I've noticed the return of a lot of long time gone rankers lately. What, did you all get locked up for a couple years or something?

[10] ALChemy 23-Jan-06/2:08 PM Reply

Nice haiku by the way.

[n/a] AuntyM › ALChemy 23-Jan-06/3:04 PM Reply

I don't write much, but I do read...I shall look over some of yours.

[10] ALChemy › AuntyM 23-Jan-06/3:13 PM Reply

They say the best readers become the best writers. Good to have you on board AuntyM.

[n/a] Dovina › AuntyM 23-Jan-06/3:21 PM Reply

I agree with Alchemy here, and don't understand what you're getting at on the INTRANSIT poem.