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Gaze (Haiku) by AuntyM
Crisp October morn Sun reflects on beveled glass Rainbows to the soul


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.230769
Weighted score: 5.8997645
Overall Rank: 1463
Posted: October 5, 2002 8:32 AM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2002 8:32 AM PDT
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[9] Dariana @ 172.155.195.61 | 6-Oct-02/5:09 AM | Reply
Totally in touch with these emotions.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 6-Oct-02/7:27 AM | Reply
Good contrast, nice visuals,and that grooovy warm fuzzy feeling to boot.
[2] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.69 | 27-Oct-02/6:52 PM | Reply
Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.
[10] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 23-Jan-06/2:07 PM | Reply
I've noticed the return of a lot of long time gone rankers lately. What, did you all get locked up for a couple years or something?
[10] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 23-Jan-06/2:08 PM | Reply
Nice haiku by the way.
[n/a] AuntyM @ 152.163.100.10 > ALChemy | 23-Jan-06/3:04 PM | Reply
I don't write much, but I do read...I shall look over some of yours.
[10] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > AuntyM | 23-Jan-06/3:13 PM | Reply
They say the best readers become the best writers. Good to have you on board AuntyM.
[n/a] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 > AuntyM | 23-Jan-06/3:21 PM | Reply
I agree with Alchemy here, and don't understand what you're getting at on the INTRANSIT poem.
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