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Gaze (Haiku) by AuntyM

Crisp October morn Sun reflects on beveled glass Rainbows to the soul

-=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/6:52 PM
Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.




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