Re: February by half.italian	1-Feb-10/10:03 PM
Thanks for responding. :) ok...It was just a simple point in time type thing, but I see where you are going. What type of payoff do you generally look for in a poem? I guess I was only trying to convey a feeling. Nothing more. I see that it could seem "incomplete" for some people. I'll see if I can expand on it. Have you submitted anything recently? This site needs some tlc from poem makers.
Re: a bit of theory by pete	24-Jan-10/9:03 PM
Léon Theremin
Re: certain things... by nypoet22	24-Jan-10/9:01 PM
No doubt.
Re: End of day poem by ecargo	24-Jan-10/8:59 PM
pewter sky :)
Re: My Thoughts by amanda_dcosta	24-Jan-10/8:55 PM
Do you choose to breath?
Re: Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina	24-Jan-10/8:53 PM
Can you please fix this a bit for me. Just add some "a"s. I love it.
Re: With Old Light by Ranger	24-Jan-10/8:51 PM
Not bad for a brit.
Re: untitle by daggatolar	22-Jan-10/11:45 PM
and hot me?
Re: Withering Blithering Blathering Wavering by T. Jonathron Remp	22-Jan-10/11:41 PM
I liked the first few lines because I could keep the beat. That must have been all you had going, because once I lost the beat, I hated it.
Re: Reunification, the Pong by http://mulberryfairy	22-Jan-10/11:37 PM
Nice imagery....but forced. It doesn't feel natural.
Re: hi by pete	22-Jan-10/11:35 PM
pete, you need some more LSD. Keep those brain juices flowing.
Re: Mother Mayday is Here to Stay (Stay Away!) by T. Jonathron Remp	22-Jan-10/11:32 PM
not poetry. Somewhat intelligent angst.
Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina	14-Sep-08/9:28 PM
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=145982
Re: Fan by Nepanthe	13-Sep-08/10:38 PM
I don't understand... yet I like it.
Re: enter, do. let up, let loose. by FreeFormFixation	7-Sep-08/1:09 AM
Hard to follow possibly because of the indentation. I like a lot of the phrases, but I can't follow because of punctuation and spacing.
Re: Gadgets and Poems by Dovina	7-Sep-08/12:53 AM
I have a hard time reading "paragraph" poetry. Take out 50 words, and split it up into somewhat rhythmic lines.
Re: Are your eyes by hobojo	7-Sep-08/12:49 AM
As lyrics, 7. As stand-alone poem 5.
Re: 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub	7-Sep-08/12:44 AM
I like the second verse alot, but the first is worthless. Make a connection.
Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy	7-Sep-08/12:33 AM
Great poem! I love the rhythm. I remember the poem about your legs. One of my favorites! This captures the same feeling.
Re: Time to Leap* edited by hobojo	7-Sep-08/12:24 AM
I personally like poems that give less details. Let the reader make his/her own conclusion. Give them a feeling, not how you are feeling. Lead them to the conclusion through visual messages.