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My Thoughts (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta Sometimes I feel I know too much
about the habits and mannerisms of man
not worrying why he does what he does.
Is it some inner motive or intention
that gets him doing the impossible
or is from an impulsive reaction to
what he possibly feels.
I do not know
and still wonder.
Up the ladder:
Rain
Down the ladder:
To my Moneta
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Posted: March 8, 2009 12:09 AM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2009 10:36 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.094852 Overall Rank: 6151 Comments:
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Blindpoetry @ 68.226.178.153
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9-Mar-09/4:46 AM
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you either know or you don't know.
I really don't get what you're trying to convey here. Ditto Blindpoetry, really. Do you know too much or too little? Or if that's the basis of your conundrum, help me realize that better.
Comes off as pretentious and empty.
Blindpoetry / nentwined - :-) Thanks for the comments. valuable. Would like to point out though that this is what our thoughts are about most often. We try to sort things out, we wonder why somethings happen, especially when we cannot find a reasonable explanation. Its like - is it this , or is it that. It is not necessary to have come to an answer at that moment, but this verse is an expression of 'wondering'. Just the very act of thinking !
ah...
Do you choose to breath?
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