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My Thoughts (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

Sometimes I feel I know too much about the habits and mannerisms of man not worrying why he does what he does. Is it some inner motive or intention that gets him doing the impossible or is from an impulsive reaction to what he possibly feels. I do not know and still wonder.

nentwined 9-Mar-09/11:20 AM
I really don't get what you're trying to convey here. Ditto Blindpoetry, really. Do you know too much or too little? Or if that's the basis of your conundrum, help me realize that better.

Comes off as pretentious and empty.




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