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Fan (Free verse) by Nepanthe
Within my rails,
spiral arms,
rotate.
The enemy who would call me family-
it is 'your' quantum gravity which lies on my thumb.
A wave around the world,
a wave around the world.
A child's fingers below the blades,
which served as the last naivety.
To extinguish the ire; cast my copper into the sea.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6155
Posted: September 13, 2008 11:11 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2008 11:11 AM PDT
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