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Fan (Free verse) by Nepanthe
Within my rails, spiral arms, rotate. The enemy who would call me family- it is 'your' quantum gravity which lies on my thumb. A wave around the world, a wave around the world. A child's fingers below the blades, which served as the last naivety. To extinguish the ire; cast my copper into the sea.

Up the ladder: Green and Yellow
Down the ladder: The Glass

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6155
Posted: September 13, 2008 11:11 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2008 11:11 AM PDT
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[7] half.italian @ 98.151.18.37 | 13-Sep-08/10:38 PM | Reply
I don't understand... yet I like it.
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