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Fan (Free verse) by Nepanthe

Within my rails, spiral arms, rotate. The enemy who would call me family- it is 'your' quantum gravity which lies on my thumb. A wave around the world, a wave around the world. A child's fingers below the blades, which served as the last naivety. To extinguish the ire; cast my copper into the sea.

half.italian 13-Sep-08/10:38 PM
I don't understand... yet I like it.




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