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enter, do. let up, let loose. (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation Eye like a raisin and hair
of a star.
Mouth of a maiden that stayed in
her car.
Arm of an angel and teeth
of a fish.
Ear of an elephant eating
a wish.
Foot of the future and hand
of the past.
Heart of the heavens (all hacked in-
to flaps).
Meat of the devil and fruit
of the vine.
One meal so evil it must be
divine.
Up the ladder:
My Mornings were Filled with Nightmares and Pies
Down the ladder:
Hawk
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Posted: August 19, 2008 8:10 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2008 8:10 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2980075 Overall Rank: 3707 Comments:
Hard to follow possibly because of the indentation. I like a lot of the phrases, but I can't follow because of punctuation and spacing.
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Blessed with eight.