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Ode № 113661

Hawk

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Oct 2004 · 2 comments

Mirage, and chaparral Circle below your red tail Heat, like a fever ghost Up-drafting, you sail And shadow play the trail. All wing span, and talon With eyes that never miss Spry, but patient hunter Red meat must be bliss On this peneplain of no rain: Prairie dog barks & Rabbit tails Road runner marks Hot wind wails. Life long mates heighten nests Environment, and daily tests Young to feed, and shade to find A regal bird with dark brown crest Predators make no man's pets Spotted chest -- killer of pests. Alone, but by choice. With desert in your voice.

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2 comments

[n/a] New Life Drug 12-Oct-04/9:57 PM Reply
gone on any hikes lately?
[10] malpaso 8-Nov-07/5:10 PM Reply
much better than that shit slinger you wrote about the 'genius'. stick to this style here. your image mining is excellent