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enter, do. let up, let loose. (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

Eye like a raisin and hair of a star. Mouth of a maiden that stayed in her car. Arm of an angel and teeth of a fish. Ear of an elephant eating a wish. Foot of the future and hand of the past. Heart of the heavens (all hacked in- to flaps). Meat of the devil and fruit of the vine. One meal so evil it must be divine.

half.italian 7-Sep-08/1:09 AM
Hard to follow possibly because of the indentation. I like a lot of the phrases, but I can't follow because of punctuation and spacing.




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