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Time to Leap* edited (Free verse) by hobojo
As I lay
I drift
and remember currents flowing
the sounds heard
of nature unwound
and emotions sour melting
Smiles
glances, caught
in memory forever
created together
and yet so far
musical attempts
imagined or real?
do I only see
what I want
to be there?
And this is my time
to shed old habits
to grow
just jump
from the cliff
do not fear what lies below
just me
alone
but better
than an unwanted place
better to wait
its possible
I'll never reach
the destination wanted
but settle no more
you damn fool
donât look back
youâve come so far
be proud
keep going
leap!
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Posted: September 6, 2008 1:09 AM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2008 1:09 AM PDT
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