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End of day poem (Free verse) by ecargo
New gold, these stubbled fields, as summer goes,
and late-day slant of sun lights grassy tufts
to amber clarity. Seeds cling to stem,
but wind will tug and free the feathered ends.
We try to count the dragonflies adrift--
hundreds glide over the stone-set paths,
fly hidden labyrinths we cannot trace,
alight on walls with quick, transparent grace.
Weâre stunned and slow as autumn-heavy bees,
transfigured by Septemberâs sorcery,
dazzled as we move through spellbound fields,
bound to hardening ground, beneath curved shield
of pewter sky. Cicadaâs churn and swallows dip and dive
beneath the sky now leached of summerâs bright
displays of blue. The air itself is charged,
and edged with cooler chimes, as nature shifts.
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Posted: September 7, 2006 5:28 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2006 5:28 PM PDT
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