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ReplyTo a comment on End of day poem by ecargo.

ecargo10 Sep 2006

Thanks Ranger. Some problems I still need to work out--the first and last verses still don't scan right to me. "Cicada's" a typo--thanks for pointing it out. I agree with "over" causing a stumble--it was "along" originally, but that made the labyrinths somewhat traceable. "Across" is a good suggestion.

As always, thanks for the read and the thoughtful comments. :-)