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Blackout, Amman, November, 2005 (Free verse) by zodiac
Opened the window just wide enough to see
Lwebideh, Old Quarter, dark, crazily headlit,
then here and there the human luminence
of old kerosene lamps lighted, candles,
even the Rainbow Street 'villas', the British Council;
the city, a softened, closer self, I imagined
bringing out those surplus Aladdins, from when
was only Jabal Amman, the Citadel, hunched
against night-raiders, saved for the known failure
of that fad, electricity. But, opening the window,
I gave the house over to a shrill, tireless
pickpocket mosquito: blood-dry, the runt last
of its season, surely. I'd been reading Jadara
Rises Again by flashlight, the bit where Christ
does in the swine, rendered in our tongue 'Gadarene'
(the swine and citizens, I mean, not the demon
or demons' name or names; those, Legion. The Many.)
In the play the man, oddly self-possessed, speaks
his own name, modestly I think clutching a tail
of beard around his bare testicles - though I
can't tell if that's dramatic necessity or knowing
here a close cousinship of man and devil,
not with this wingsound, this high whee in the dark
(the worst thing, worse than tinder-piles of bites,
the nagging groove of itch, like a lip catching
your fingers.) Sometimes, behind the stove, he's like
a violin badly tuning somewhere in
a highrise, the pure C-sharp of exhaustion; sometimes
so close I clap my ears, stumble the house
slashing the walls with my torch's small bore
to pin him down. Thinking, here, bug, coequaled
here, friend, is a prime example: one
of us Legion, one Fire-Eyed Prophet; one
to hurtle seaward, one to lay his hands
soul-weary then upon the waiting cross;
one whistling in the dark, one yet as lost.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.833333
Weighted score: 6.2998834
Overall Rank: 880
Posted: November 18, 2005 9:30 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2005 9:34 AM PST
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Because this one comes out so damn natural.
Second: Love how you snuck "bore" in.
Third: I bet you're leaning towards the bug being Jesus. I was.
Forth: There's a current political spin to this one, intended or not.
I could spend all day peeling back layers of this poem.
A sign of a great artwork. You really shouldn't give some of these away for free.
Second, I stole it from something I've read recently and forgotten. I have a list of "Words to Use in Poems" on my refrigerator I add to whenever I find a good one.
Third, at least, I'd rather be the sea-hurtler than the resigned crucifixion.
Fourth, of course. I don't actually live in Amman. I am having a lot of blackouts recently, though. Something about how it hasn't rained for the last 8 months, water's fouling the transformers.
I'm always surprised and flattered by your readings. I mean, surprised because there're things I'd given up on anyone seeing. Thanks. I mean that.
While on a second reading with a political approach. When you got to the "Whee" part I couldn't help but picture GWB's face superimposed onto Ned Beatty's in that infamous scene in Deliverence.
I got this image of you writing this with the word "Locusts" flying around your head and trying to land on your poem and ruin it. You're feverishly writing while swatting at it and saying "Get the fuck out of here! Go fly up Linda Blairs ass." I kept thinking while I was reading this "Please don't say locusts. This is the best thing I've read in a while and If you say locusts I'm going to kill you.