poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Blackout, Amman, November, 2005 by zodiac.

ALChemy18 Nov 2005

First: Does that ability to echoe word sounds, not rhyme but echoe certain qualities in words together come naturally or is it more of a hair pulling event.
Because this one comes out so damn natural.

Second: Love how you snuck "bore" in.

Third: I bet you're leaning towards the bug being Jesus. I was.

Forth: There's a current political spin to this one, intended or not.

I could spend all day peeling back layers of this poem.
A sign of a great artwork. You really shouldn't give some of these away for free.