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untitle (Free verse) by daggatolar treat me with cold
unable to fly remains to me
and hot me
how else can you
surpass my own sickness of you
if i don´t want you to die
Up the ladder:
Illusion
Down the ladder:
I Feel Love (Blue Lily Of The Nile)
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Posted: November 28, 2009 9:11 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2009 9:11 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8102965 Overall Rank: 10977 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 207.5.157.235
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7-Dec-09/3:38 PM
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I don't get the first verse at all. Second is nice.
and hot me?
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