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untitle (Free verse) by daggatolar
treat me with cold unable to fly remains to me and hot me how else can you surpass my own sickness of you if i don´t want you to die

Up the ladder: His Maiden

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10923
Posted: November 28, 2009 9:11 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2009 9:11 AM PST
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[n/a] http://mulberryfairy @ 207.5.157.235 | 7-Dec-09/3:38 PM | Reply
I don't get the first verse at all. Second is nice.
[1] half.italian @ 75.82.193.144 | 22-Jan-10/11:45 PM | Reply
and hot me?
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