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His Maiden (Free verse) by Skamper
he leaned across
the black marble table top
I knew
when did this happen
the skin fell from me
he knew
eyes blackened by nature
secured the knowledge
I thought to shield
he drifted through me
his invasion
was expected and deserved
no matter - I bled anyway
and loved him still
I lay - the black marble
shifting under skin
he strokes
he strays his ugliness
to the pieces left
untouched
eyes burned by devils
released the courage
I thought to bear
he devoured me
his feasting
was lasting and agonising
no matter - I came anyway
and loved him still
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Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10983
Posted: June 27, 2007 4:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2007 4:53 PM PDT
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