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His Maiden (Free verse) by Skamper
he leaned across the black marble table top I knew when did this happen the skin fell from me he knew eyes blackened by nature secured the knowledge I thought to shield he drifted through me his invasion was expected and deserved no matter - I bled anyway and loved him still I lay - the black marble shifting under skin he strokes he strays his ugliness to the pieces left untouched eyes burned by devils released the courage I thought to bear he devoured me his feasting was lasting and agonising no matter - I came anyway and loved him still

Up the ladder: life between lines
Down the ladder: hollow queen

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10970
Posted: June 27, 2007 4:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2007 4:53 PM PDT
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