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Tropical afternoon (Free verse) by cpill
A wet sky ends another flushed day
Letting go of the days hot frustrations
Releasing the struggle that started at dawn
So one can finally say "I'm done"
The race is over. Nobody won.
The cool breeze retires ambition
Letting the shoulders sag and, put on loose shoes,
Smile in the company of others
Reflecting at the slow replay of the days events
Forever to be frozen in memory
Washed in hopes or regrets
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10984
Posted: June 14, 2007 3:55 AM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2007 9:31 AM PDT
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I do like this write - it's quiet way of getting the message across...