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hollow queen (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
expression barren with the snow cold touch
my mind weathers your winter shoulder
static whiteout on the edge of oblivion
the mirage intangible, virtually unattainable
long distance lines forging paths ahead
converging at the end despite distracting ex's and oh's
soft candy melting in your mouth, with one in the hand
a sweet goodbye solidifying our broken bond
with enduring impact on our lives
Hiroshima harbor became erased in haste by the D-bomb
ash falling like flakes on the last bastion of our friendship
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Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10973
Posted: November 5, 2009 6:54 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2009 6:54 PM PST
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