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hollow queen (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
expression barren with the snow cold touch my mind weathers your winter shoulder static whiteout on the edge of oblivion the mirage intangible, virtually unattainable long distance lines forging paths ahead converging at the end despite distracting ex's and oh's soft candy melting in your mouth, with one in the hand a sweet goodbye solidifying our broken bond with enduring impact on our lives Hiroshima harbor became erased in haste by the D-bomb ash falling like flakes on the last bastion of our friendship

Up the ladder: His Maiden
Down the ladder: Tropical afternoon

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10971
Posted: November 5, 2009 6:54 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2009 6:54 PM PST
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