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untitle (Free verse) by daggatolar

treat me with cold unable to fly remains to me and hot me how else can you surpass my own sickness of you if i don´t want you to die

http://mulberryfairy 7-Dec-09/3:38 PM
I don't get the first verse at all. Second is nice.




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