| Re: a comment on yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh |
23-Sep-02/9:51 PM |
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funny how at first everyone thought i was you...now its gotta be D.A. ? Its strange how in this cyber-world it is easy to define someone as another...but in the face, the face becomes a person's main identity. Where's my champagne...and cocaine.
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| Re: a comment on yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh |
22-Sep-02/11:32 PM |
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HORUS8 - thanks for the suggestion...I too, agree. In the upmost respect, sir, you sit high upon my shelf of beauty, interest, and respect. Thank you. Please re-vote, if you please...the moon walks across the sky, eyeing the mysterious subject the entails humans..and others like you. (in a good way)
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| Re: Romantic Getaway by ASTRO-GLIDE |
21-Sep-02/10:24 PM |
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I don't know about you techie-writer's but my computer must be outdated (you idiot). Write so that we can read, fool. Don't you proof-read. Apparently not.
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| Re: Ouch by heroditus |
21-Sep-02/10:12 PM |
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if frogs had wings they wouldn't hit their asses when they moved one place to another...right? hip-hop..don't trip on the stairs behind my left ear or fall out the window downstairs. 5
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| Re: .:|bittersweet|:. by emman |
21-Sep-02/10:09 PM |
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full of painfull images and hopefull (less) pains that others...(or one) causes. Pass the vermouth...my lips are burning.
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| Re: quickie by <~> |
20-Sep-02/11:19 PM |
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This poem is tempting, intriguing--like its author
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| Re: Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus |
20-Sep-02/11:17 PM |
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Truth is indeed in the cloak of the words. The style is tripped out, but cool
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| Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof |
20-Sep-02/11:09 PM |
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The topic of where desire starts is always an interesting one Bacchus. The detail of the cortex is ethereal
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| Re: In the Light by nocturnalism |
19-Sep-02/1:49 AM |
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truth my son...will set you free. Champagne and vasoline addictions are hard to come by.. you'll see. I like it. I like the honesty (more)...and contentment that i see (and feel) from now on. 7
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| Re: No insurance? No treatment! by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
19-Sep-02/12:12 AM |
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harsh realities are always attempting to reconcile. Its an interesting piece laced with afterthoughts ( yes? ) the dust doesn't always disapear but the paperwork stays. filed. forever. insured or not. 7
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| Re: Why... by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/11:01 PM |
sir, may I dare say...0
horray!! another ill-poem that will even make the children cringe.
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| Re: What would I do without you? by Chels85 |
18-Sep-02/10:57 PM |
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maybe this would be better suited in an envelope laced with ANTHRAX. Give me his address and I'll send it for you. I've head it's quick. I'll send you a copy. ok?
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| Re: You're the Only One by Chels85 |
18-Sep-02/10:54 PM |
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oh kay. life's a bitch, hey?
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| Re: Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87 |
18-Sep-02/10:37 PM |
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Sorry. erased. don't know what got into me... Everyone feels this way sometimes..Don't worry. You'll look back to these times later in your life and appreciate who YOU were. Define yourself and don't let others push you around. Demand RESPECT.
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| Re: Where the Heart is. by flatliner |
18-Sep-02/10:08 PM |
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| Re: Operation: Nielsens by bondjedi |
18-Sep-02/10:03 PM |
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Smile - ever beautiful, in the heat of summer...zzinia is still alive..(wink) Your still on my shelf, bright; lighting; comforting these eyes.
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| Re: Communion by unknown |
18-Sep-02/1:30 AM |
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devilishly written, my friend. Vampires and wolves come out to meet the naughty and taut wrath of your sins.. Pray tonight.
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| Re: a comment on Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh |
18-Sep-02/1:13 AM |
how is this weird? Its a simple thought progression that found its way into word forms. The day may be gone now, but it will come back tomorrow. A single chorus girls sang and the curtains opened. Nothing but blackness appeared..The lights went out.
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| Re: Tugboats by poetandknowit |
18-Sep-02/1:08 AM |
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I have always been pulled towards your writing. Its magnetized tonight, rightfully so. You sir, are surely in my eyes...beckon and spoken sometime inbetween and throughout-without. 8
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| Re: The Call of Duty by waltfreakinwhitman |
18-Sep-02/12:50 AM |
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Maybe you should change brands or get off the bran-meal diet. Its funny the way simplicities become relevent. 6
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