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Ouch (Haiku) by heroditus Aim for the sky but,
never ever play leapfrog,
with a unicorn.
Up the ladder:
To Orange
Down the ladder:
The Elephant Olympics
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Posted: September 21, 2002 4:48 AM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2002 6:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.665018 Overall Rank: 2082 Comments:
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dragonfly @ 209.239.208.241
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21-Sep-02/2:59 PM
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haha! wise words. Nice haiku.
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if frogs had wings they wouldn't hit their asses when they moved one place to another...right? hip-hop..don't trip on the stairs behind my left ear or fall out the window downstairs. 5
Hurray! One for the lads
Yipe.Quite right. This is good advice to any young man.
Words of wisdom! Love it! Not out
of line to vote you a nine.
Tes, it is funny. But I am not sure about whether it works with the analogy of "Aim for the sky." Something like "Frolic with the beasts" may work better.
Is this a haiku or a proverb? Either way it would hurt.
lose the commas.
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