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Haiku № 16426

Ouch

by heroditus

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Sep 2002 · Edited 21 Sep 2002 · 9 comments

Aim for the sky but, never ever play leapfrog, with a unicorn.

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9 comments

[7] dragonfly 21-Sep-02/2:59 PM Reply
haha! wise words. Nice haiku.
[1] emman 21-Sep-02/9:19 PM Reply
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[5] royalflesh 21-Sep-02/10:12 PM Reply
if frogs had wings they wouldn't hit their asses when they moved one place to another...right? hip-hop..don't trip on the stairs behind my left ear or fall out the window downstairs. 5
[n/a] deleted user 23-Sep-02/5:38 AM Reply
Hurray! One for the lads
[8] Christof 23-Sep-02/6:15 AM Reply
Yipe.Quite right. This is good advice to any young man.
[9] Quarton 1-Dec-02/12:48 PM Reply
Words of wisdom! Love it! Not out
of line to vote you a nine.
[7] Nicholas Monson 3-Dec-02/1:47 PM Reply
Tes, it is funny. But I am not sure about whether it works with the analogy of "Aim for the sky." Something like "Frolic with the beasts" may work better.
[1] poetandknowit 16-Jan-03/10:27 PM Reply
Is this a haiku or a proverb? Either way it would hurt.
[7] Robert K Foster 10-Jun-03/9:51 AM Reply
lose the commas.