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Ouch (Haiku) by heroditus

Aim for the sky but, never ever play leapfrog, with a unicorn.

Nicholas Monson 3-Dec-02/1:47 PM
Tes, it is funny. But I am not sure about whether it works with the analogy of "Aim for the sky." Something like "Frolic with the beasts" may work better.




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