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In the Light (Free verse) by nocturnalism
Out in the open, out in plan sight
Hearing every thought in your head
It's hiding in the light
Mocking every word you've said
No escaping from this constant psychosis
All shadows disappear from the reality of this nightmare
I never thought the neurosis
Would last this long, but now its clear
I'll never make it back from where I came
Ther's to much guilt too deny
Its too late now, I'm too ashamed
There's no escape from all the lies
It's hiding in the light, filthy creature of depravity
In plan sight its scorning me
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.818182
Weighted score: 4.909091
Overall Rank: 9696
Posted: September 19, 2002 1:35 AM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2002 1:35 AM PDT
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