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In the Light (Free verse) by nocturnalism

Out in the open, out in plan sight Hearing every thought in your head It's hiding in the light Mocking every word you've said No escaping from this constant psychosis All shadows disappear from the reality of this nightmare I never thought the neurosis Would last this long, but now its clear I'll never make it back from where I came Ther's to much guilt too deny Its too late now, I'm too ashamed There's no escape from all the lies It's hiding in the light, filthy creature of depravity In plan sight its scorning me

poetandknowit 19-Sep-02/8:55 AM
Besides being awful, I think you have a terrible misunderstanding of neurosis and that adds to the banality twofold.




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