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Some Suburban Clarity (Free verse) by antoniojl Before this kiss, doused in high bliss,
Can twist our passion'd minds together,
Or our eyes can close, love-lifted,
By rose-hot desires...
Let's be clear on the semantics.
That
Forever is a very, very long time,
That
Marriage is a legally binding contract,
And that
Love is a word invented by philosophers and used by fools.
Up the ladder:
ditched by them slowpokes
Down the ladder:
In the Light
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.818182
Posted: May 20, 2002 6:37 AM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2002 6:37 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.909091 Overall Rank: 9696 Comments:
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jfackf @ 207.6.153.71
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12-Jul-02/11:41 PM
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I love the twist! Enough sappiness, eh?
Cathes me off guard, but leaves my illuminated
WOW! I really liked this. I love the way you set this up. It seems to me to be very effective in that it feels like a movement between two people. Very well done!
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