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Some Suburban Clarity (Free verse) by antoniojl

Before this kiss, doused in high bliss, Can twist our passion'd minds together, Or our eyes can close, love-lifted, By rose-hot desires... Let's be clear on the semantics. That Forever is a very, very long time, That Marriage is a legally binding contract, And that Love is a word invented by philosophers and used by fools.

jfackf 12-Jul-02/11:41 PM
I love the twist! Enough sappiness, eh?




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