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What would I do without you? (Free verse) by Chels85
Everyday I sit and wonder why I love you so much, and you ask me all the time to tell you why. Now I can. I see it in your eyes when you look at me that our love is true. I love everything about you. You're the best thing that has come into my life.... You give me this feeling....one I never felt before, this feeling only you can give me. I want you to be with me for the rest of our lives. I know you're the one for me. You're all I think about, day and night. I don't think anyone can ever love you as much as I might. You're one of a kind, you're my heart, you're my mind, you're my body. You're the reason I live, you're the reason why I'm up all night. I don't know where I'd be without you.... I'd be lost?


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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.0
Overall Rank: 13384
Posted: September 18, 2002 6:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 6:44 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] royalflesh @ 67.115.84.106 | 18-Sep-02/10:57 PM | Reply
maybe this would be better suited in an envelope laced with ANTHRAX. Give me his address and I'll send it for you. I've head it's quick. I'll send you a copy. ok?
[1] pomoxo @ 158.252.242.71 | 19-Jan-03/12:40 AM | Reply
vomitrocious...i'm sure you're sig. other really loved this but no one else gives a shit this sounds like a million terrible pop songs that have already been written absolutely nothing original going on
[9] PhSbLoNdE569 @ 205.188.208.105 | 5-Mar-04/4:17 PM | Reply
omg thats gr8
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