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What would I do without you? (Free verse) by Chels85

Everyday I sit and wonder why I love you so much, and you ask me all the time to tell you why. Now I can. I see it in your eyes when you look at me that our love is true. I love everything about you. You're the best thing that has come into my life.... You give me this feeling....one I never felt before, this feeling only you can give me. I want you to be with me for the rest of our lives. I know you're the one for me. You're all I think about, day and night. I don't think anyone can ever love you as much as I might. You're one of a kind, you're my heart, you're my mind, you're my body. You're the reason I live, you're the reason why I'm up all night. I don't know where I'd be without you.... I'd be lost?

pomoxo 19-Jan-03/12:40 AM
vomitrocious...i'm sure you're sig. other really loved this but no one else gives a shit this sounds like a million terrible pop songs that have already been written absolutely nothing original going on




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