| Re: a comment on "Huh?...What?" by royalflesh |
18-Sep-02/12:47 AM |
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its the laugh in the face. the uncanny coincidences..that takes us on long rides, fearfull yet powerfully obtained through our own obstacles. The night has gotten to me - somewhere I look for that Silverado land yet at the same time get lost on the way, the journey to the darker street.
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| Re: Stifled by wordsphincter |
18-Sep-02/12:32 AM |
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| Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 |
18-Sep-02/12:29 AM |
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This is definitely a favorite of mine and once this trip is over...once the scary thoughts escape...and I am able to really get down and dirty...I would be honored to have some thoughts, your's, night-tongued, and deeply sexy in your words. mouth.
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| Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 |
17-Sep-02/10:55 PM |
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I'm completely captivated...barely breathing because I am so fucked up at the moment. Again, my heart aches.. and don't even know what to say. Ill get to you later...I really want to go through this...give me an hour. And wait for me outside while the rains fall upon a baptismal fall. 10
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
17-Sep-02/2:53 PM |
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truely an ill-kissed reality. My chest pounds through your pure talent to write and aches with desire - to have half your ability and elevated reality of truth. 9
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| Re: crispy by skaskowski |
16-Sep-02/11:48 AM |
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i'd like to see more effort. Cringe-daggers in my back and make them come back for more. 5
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| Re: A.M. by renwick |
16-Sep-02/11:46 AM |
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ok. there's much to be considered adhearing to such a disaster of language. You sir, wear a cloak and spin nervously through the day to find the other twin that beckens your lousy name. Ciao, good day. 3
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| Re: Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
15-Sep-02/11:23 PM |
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Baba^Yaga - seems like you've got some itchity switch that needs a cleansing. Try holy water - (its in the back of the sanctuary, next to the pope's glory hole) If you talk to the dispenser of your ill-fated and tainted drip on a regular basis tell her. Otherwise fuck her (just not like the other leathered and feathered trickity whore night).
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| Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus |
14-Sep-02/1:17 AM |
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tantilizing. metamorphic beauty. Read it over just to see fuzzy again. Definitely top quality and makes me fondle the quality of my other night (project) task of looking out for my counter (part). 9
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| Re: A Man Of The World by vulcan |
14-Sep-02/1:12 AM |
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I lick kitty. Then throw it around the corner to check back again, tomorrow.
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| Re: a comment on Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh |
12-Sep-02/9:07 PM |
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Slounder. Slither. Thoughts. D.A. of course not, we all need to experience the other side, that of un-lyric and pompi potus.
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| Re: america's promise by dylansong |
12-Sep-02/9:03 PM |
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only made it half-way through....let's get dinner and talk.
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| Re: Love is just a word by trev086 |
12-Sep-02/9:03 PM |
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Know exactly how you feel. Like this one much better. Good job. Great work! 8
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| Re: Kept Safe by trev086 |
12-Sep-02/9:02 PM |
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ok trev. I really like the first stanza...might be interesting to play around with more word choice.
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| Re: We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass |
12-Sep-02/9:00 PM |
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right...you wanted to touch them to see if those muscles were real of not. Interesting tid-bit of "Real-Life" ... but seriously...is this something worth writing about?? Like it, but would rather read Dr. Seuss.
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| Re: fairy tale by jlanza |
12-Sep-02/8:59 PM |
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touch me! Your getting hot! and making me sweat. ever read the magician's heart. its hard to find.
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| Re: deluge by kawakurdi |
12-Sep-02/8:57 PM |
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captivating ramshed of interesting and thoughtfull words. Impressed without disbelief. Knew you would pull through. In the wrench of the day the night doth fall hard and fast...so they say. 8/10
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| Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn |
12-Sep-02/7:13 PM |
where's the "dark and depressing" part. I have seemed to have missed it. All is well. Behave! Behave!
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| Re: Life's Great Irony by Tascobar |
12-Sep-02/7:11 PM |
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maybe being unable to hear let him understand the unspoken ( or rather , respoken ) gestures more carefully. Thus, being even more aware of what was going on behind his back (in front of his face). Hmmm...just maybe.
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| Re: a comment on Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh |
12-Sep-02/7:08 PM |
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I'll take that as a compliment...I sing too - I once did an opera one summer night on the bay of biscay...It was dreadful. You might have liked it. Eerie - freekity - schmoozing - champagne - and midnight creatures.
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