replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 10:20 PM
still swarming, slithly, thoroughly through the wretched compartments of yesterday's affairs. Would be greatly admired, your voice must ache of love as does mine. Interwine? Or just dine?
replying on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 10:16 PM
P&K...didn't you use this eloquently somewhere else tonight...I do believe, if not mistaken your, double jeopordy scourning the tight weaved moon of this blistering night. Ay!
on Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal
11 Sep 2002, 9:41 PM
essence of relationships. Well put. Well deserved 8/10
replying on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
11 Sep 2002, 9:33 PM
Ah. I must be clicking the "X" instead of REPLY. Sorry. Didn't mean to boot your comment. Please...again. more. more.
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
11 Sep 2002, 9:25 PM
P&K - hey there. New here. Give me a hand. How do I respond to people's comments on my poems?? Would love to converse. Civilized. Royalfleshly.
on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 9:05 PM
great! very impressed! You're going somewhere - and this is part of the traveling. Fantastic-iclicly-make-me-cum good. 9/10
on Reflected, Dreamed by Frass
11 Sep 2002, 9:01 PM
good turns, transitions, juxations. Upside down i read and see a meaning that is very, incredibly gleaming. Love it. Love it. 8/10
on A missing puzzle piece. by trev086
11 Sep 2002, 8:57 PM
is this some kind of school assignment? Please, try not to be so predictable. I respect your writing, but capture something else...with all due respect. 5/10
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 8:31 PM
You idiots.. don't you understand anything. Its life. Live. Enjoy. Die. anyways..followers or failure. DarkA. I found it invoking, cautiously simulated within the wind of today's time and hour's friend. Cherrio.
on the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 8:18 PM
Kawa - I want to hear your voice in your writing. Who are you? Kawa -turdy. Nice, but give me more. More tricks, licks, micks, kicks, sick..soon..bick shick. Razor burn.
on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 8:11 PM
tantilizing tid-bit. Horror-ishly visibly embeded in my mind. Horror and sex. Wet and sweat. Trick or treat. Gread.
on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn
11 Sep 2002, 7:31 PM
there are some matters that need clarity in this piece. Try to break it up to make the read more lively.