Re: a comment on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> |
11-Sep-02/10:20 PM |
still swarming, slithly, thoroughly through the wretched compartments of yesterday's affairs. Would be greatly admired, your voice must ache of love as does mine. Interwine? Or just dine?
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Re: a comment on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi |
11-Sep-02/10:16 PM |
P&K...didn't you use this eloquently somewhere else tonight...I do believe, if not mistaken your, double jeopordy scourning the tight weaved moon of this blistering night. Ay!
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Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal |
11-Sep-02/9:41 PM |
essence of relationships. Well put. Well deserved 8/10
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Re: a comment on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit |
11-Sep-02/9:33 PM |
Ah. I must be clicking the "X" instead of REPLY. Sorry. Didn't mean to boot your comment. Please...again. more. more.
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Re: while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit |
11-Sep-02/9:25 PM |
P&K - hey there. New here. Give me a hand. How do I respond to people's comments on my poems?? Would love to converse. Civilized. Royalfleshly.
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Re: Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi |
11-Sep-02/9:05 PM |
great! very impressed! You're going somewhere - and this is part of the traveling. Fantastic-iclicly-make-me-cum good. 9/10
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Re: Reflected, Dreamed by Frass |
11-Sep-02/9:01 PM |
good turns, transitions, juxations. Upside down i read and see a meaning that is very, incredibly gleaming. Love it. Love it. 8/10
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Re: A missing puzzle piece. by trev086 |
11-Sep-02/8:57 PM |
is this some kind of school assignment? Please, try not to be so predictable. I respect your writing, but capture something else...with all due respect. 5/10
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Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Sep-02/8:31 PM |
You idiots.. don't you understand anything. Its life. Live. Enjoy. Die. anyways..followers or failure. DarkA. I found it invoking, cautiously simulated within the wind of today's time and hour's friend. Cherrio.
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Re: the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi |
11-Sep-02/8:18 PM |
Kawa - I want to hear your voice in your writing. Who are you? Kawa -turdy. Nice, but give me more. More tricks, licks, micks, kicks, sick..soon..bick shick. Razor burn.
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Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~> |
11-Sep-02/8:11 PM |
tantilizing tid-bit. Horror-ishly visibly embeded in my mind. Horror and sex. Wet and sweat. Trick or treat. Gread.
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Re: Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn |
11-Sep-02/7:31 PM |
there are some matters that need clarity in this piece. Try to break it up to make the read more lively.
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