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Kept Safe (Free verse) by trev086
The queasiness in my stomach The thought of you not here Gives me the shivers but not much more to fear I know your there for me like you always have Someone to hold my hand and always keep me glad. The late moonlight walks right under the stars Bring me happiness for us both to share In day or night I???ve got your spirit Kept in a place stronger than a locket I knew this day would come, the girl of my dreams You???ve seeped into me like I had no seams. I???ve got a strong grasp I???ll never let go We ride the waves always on an adventure As we drift together maybe forever. Our feelings so strong we???ve formed that bond Of trust security and happiness. Words cannot express the way I feel for you It???s just that gut feeling which I have for you I shall never grow hungry since I have you here Your love will take place of all that I fear. Baby I love you with all my heart This relationship we have will never part. ~Trevor Greene

Up the ladder: Death From Above
Down the ladder: down

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.625
Weighted score: 4.361264
Overall Rank: 13044
Posted: September 12, 2002 4:23 AM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2002 4:23 AM PDT
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[6] royalflesh @ 64.170.52.79 | 12-Sep-02/9:02 PM | Reply
ok trev. I really like the first stanza...might be interesting to play around with more word choice.
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Dec-02/4:19 PM | Reply
take the question marks out, and than unfortunately every word, but two. ~ Trevor Greene. You see trevor, sometimes a blank letter can say so much more. like my mind is blank. use your fucking imagination for the love of a beutifull special young lady could you, please? PLEASE!. thanks, love horus8. p.s
merry christmas.
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