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Kept Safe (Free verse) by trev086

The queasiness in my stomach The thought of you not here Gives me the shivers but not much more to fear I know your there for me like you always have Someone to hold my hand and always keep me glad. The late moonlight walks right under the stars Bring me happiness for us both to share In day or night I???ve got your spirit Kept in a place stronger than a locket I knew this day would come, the girl of my dreams You???ve seeped into me like I had no seams. I???ve got a strong grasp I???ll never let go We ride the waves always on an adventure As we drift together maybe forever. Our feelings so strong we???ve formed that bond Of trust security and happiness. Words cannot express the way I feel for you It???s just that gut feeling which I have for you I shall never grow hungry since I have you here Your love will take place of all that I fear. Baby I love you with all my heart This relationship we have will never part. ~Trevor Greene

royalflesh 12-Sep-02/9:02 PM
ok trev. I really like the first stanza...might be interesting to play around with more word choice.




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