| Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky |
26-May-02/11:54 AM |
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This is the sound of my eyes bursting.
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| Re: The Last Battle by seebergerb |
26-May-02/11:50 AM |
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What's a 'cloisture'? Good use of the word 'like'! Sometimes metaphor can be too strong, can't it?
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| Re: The Green by Syr Charles |
26-May-02/11:49 AM |
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Well it's tough being a loser. I feel your pain. Why not add something about searching and vampyres?
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| Re: in love with jane doe by crin |
26-May-02/11:49 AM |
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You're poem is sure great!!
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| Re: actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav |
26-May-02/11:48 AM |
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| Re: Anger Management by wlshepherd |
26-May-02/9:23 AM |
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Yes. Perspective. Yes. There are so many issues out there. Like abortion, nudity, poverty and nudity to name but a few. I guess we all need a little perspective from time to time, right guys!?
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| Re: Economics 499 by ErgoErgun |
23-May-02/10:48 AM |
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Nice allegory of economics! No, wait, it's crap!
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| Re: Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum by ruella |
23-May-02/10:18 AM |
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This is the best poem ever. Please submit more.
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| Re: Spring Haiku by Staika |
22-May-02/5:26 AM |
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Nice one! I love the use of the words "spring" and "dusk". I've never seen those in a poem before!
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| Re: Wicked Danny, A Lesson For You All by ruella |
21-May-02/2:36 PM |
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| Re: New Rose by malakin |
21-May-02/2:10 PM |
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| Re: Saturation Point by malakin |
21-May-02/2:10 PM |
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You can't serve charisma in a coffee cup. That's just wrong.
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| Re: Out Doubt! by wlshepherd |
17-May-02/9:09 AM |
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Do you? Do you really know what you want? That's not what mummy thinks.
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| Re: Conquered Innocence by muted_screams |
17-May-02/8:45 AM |
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A lady should never pollute the world with wild and dangerous opinions of her own, but lowliness...lowliness is what she should strive for.
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| Re: Cancel that thought by wlshepherd |
15-May-02/5:32 PM |
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Excellent work. I love the way you carried the theme from the first verse right through the rest of the poem. Cancel that thought.
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| Re: Fighting Peacefully. by LucidRevelation |
15-May-02/5:25 PM |
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I suggest that all poems containing the following words be deleted: dusk, dawn, moonlight, sunlight, sunsets, dew, mist and wind (unless preceded by the word break)
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| Re: Question of the day by PooP |
15-May-02/1:49 AM |
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Let x be this poem. Let A be the set of all awful poems. The intersection of A and {x} is not the empty set.
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| Re: Echoes by malakin |
14-May-02/6:58 AM |
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Well it was mostly awful... but I did like the fact that it was about minstrels. Four thumbs up!
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| Re: Hurting Heart by faded_twilight |
14-May-02/2:22 AM |
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I take it this is the resolution of your last poem? Equally great!
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| Re: that boy by nessness |
14-May-02/1:28 AM |
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If this was any more cheery and trite I would explode.
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