on Spring Haiku by Staika
22 May 2002, 5:26 AM
Nice one! I love the use of the words "spring" and "dusk". I've never seen those in a poem before!
on Wicked Danny, A Lesson For You All by ruella
21 May 2002, 2:36 PM
Quirky. See me.
on Saturation Point by malakin
21 May 2002, 2:10 PM
You can't serve charisma in a coffee cup. That's just wrong.
on Out Doubt! by wlshepherd
17 May 2002, 9:09 AM
Do you? Do you really know what you want? That's not what mummy thinks.
on Conquered Innocence by muted_screams
17 May 2002, 8:45 AM
A lady should never pollute the world with wild and dangerous opinions of her own, but lowliness...lowliness is what she should strive for.
on Cancel that thought by wlshepherd
15 May 2002, 5:32 PM
Excellent work. I love the way you carried the theme from the first verse right through the rest of the poem. Cancel that thought.
on Fighting Peacefully. by LucidRevelation
15 May 2002, 5:25 PM
I suggest that all poems containing the following words be deleted: dusk, dawn, moonlight, sunlight, sunsets, dew, mist and wind (unless preceded by the word break)
on Question of the day by PooP
15 May 2002, 1:49 AM
Let x be this poem. Let A be the set of all awful poems. The intersection of A and {x} is not the empty set.
on Hurting Heart by faded_twilight
14 May 2002, 2:22 AM
I take it this is the resolution of your last poem? Equally great!
on I like to run by T.Becquerel II
13 May 2002, 1:48 AM
Not particularly interesting, but better than most of the self-absorbed shit on this site.
on (untitled) by Mystifying
13 May 2002, 1:46 AM
Thank you! I'm so glad that these sentiments have finally been expressed in verse, and in such a witty, flowing way! I hope you continue to have profound and meaningful experiences, and move us all with your poetic recitations of them!
on Midnight Delight (a sexual sequal) by crims0ngh0st
12 May 2002, 2:35 PM
I think you need to refer to night and moonlight more.
on pull by skaskowski
12 May 2002, 2:33 PM
Perhaps you pulled frality from a satisfactory!
on Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg
12 May 2002, 2:32 PM
FUNNY AND PROVOCATIVE
on Hammered Nail by drjhoss
12 May 2002, 12:33 PM
I think your ear infection is infecting our ears via the medium of carpentry poems. A haughty fellowe indeede! Keep it up!