| Re: Spring Haiku by Staika |
22-May-02/5:26 AM |
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Nice one! I love the use of the words "spring" and "dusk". I've never seen those in a poem before!
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| Re: Wicked Danny, A Lesson For You All by ruella |
21-May-02/2:36 PM |
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| Re: New Rose by malakin |
21-May-02/2:10 PM |
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| Re: Saturation Point by malakin |
21-May-02/2:10 PM |
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You can't serve charisma in a coffee cup. That's just wrong.
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| Re: Out Doubt! by wlshepherd |
17-May-02/9:09 AM |
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Do you? Do you really know what you want? That's not what mummy thinks.
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| Re: Conquered Innocence by muted_screams |
17-May-02/8:45 AM |
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A lady should never pollute the world with wild and dangerous opinions of her own, but lowliness...lowliness is what she should strive for.
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| Re: Cancel that thought by wlshepherd |
15-May-02/5:32 PM |
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Excellent work. I love the way you carried the theme from the first verse right through the rest of the poem. Cancel that thought.
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| Re: Fighting Peacefully. by LucidRevelation |
15-May-02/5:25 PM |
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I suggest that all poems containing the following words be deleted: dusk, dawn, moonlight, sunlight, sunsets, dew, mist and wind (unless preceded by the word break)
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| Re: Question of the day by PooP |
15-May-02/1:49 AM |
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Let x be this poem. Let A be the set of all awful poems. The intersection of A and {x} is not the empty set.
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| Re: Echoes by malakin |
14-May-02/6:58 AM |
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Well it was mostly awful... but I did like the fact that it was about minstrels. Four thumbs up!
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| Re: Hurting Heart by faded_twilight |
14-May-02/2:22 AM |
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I take it this is the resolution of your last poem? Equally great!
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| Re: that boy by nessness |
14-May-02/1:28 AM |
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If this was any more cheery and trite I would explode.
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| Re: Driftwood by malakin |
13-May-02/10:57 AM |
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Well, it started badly, tailed off a little in the middle and the less said about the end the better. Apart from that I loved it!
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| Re: stupid by mogwai |
13-May-02/7:37 AM |
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Don't worry mate! You're never alone. Jesu is always with you. But he's invisible.
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| Re: I like to run by T.Becquerel II |
13-May-02/1:48 AM |
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Not particularly interesting, but better than most of the self-absorbed shit on this site.
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| Re: (untitled) by Mystifying |
13-May-02/1:46 AM |
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Thank you! I'm so glad that these sentiments have finally been expressed in verse, and in such a witty, flowing way! I hope you continue to have profound and meaningful experiences, and move us all with your poetic recitations of them!
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| Re: Midnight Delight (a sexual sequal) by crims0ngh0st |
12-May-02/2:35 PM |
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I think you need to refer to night and moonlight more.
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| Re: pull by skaskowski |
12-May-02/2:33 PM |
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Perhaps you pulled frality from a satisfactory!
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| Re: Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg |
12-May-02/2:32 PM |
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| Re: Hammered Nail by drjhoss |
12-May-02/12:33 PM |
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I think your ear infection is infecting our ears via the medium of carpentry poems. A haughty fellowe indeede! Keep it up!
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