wah

Interesting, poetry as commentary... hm..

here's a clue... you've added to the pot the same old crap you complain about... congratulations. you've excelled in idiocy..

Pbtbtbtbtbbtbt.

What the hell... why doesn't anybody like this poem?

I didn't think it was that bad. It's easy to have one's opinion about a person cloud how you read their poetry, I guess. I don't know PooP.

Let x be this poem. Let A be the set of all awful poems. The intersection of A and {x} is not the empty set.

It's just you.

what is better a good job, or a "how you should change your poem" comment. I personally didn't put my poetry on here to get "pats on the back" I wanted someone to tell me what they thought of it, even if it is a bit harsh.... by the way this is a good poem, probably helped you vent a lot of frustration.

We are here to grow, so grow up and take it like a man.

i completely agree