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Cancel that thought (Free verse) by wlshepherd
Whenever I am hungry I try to eat something, Sometimes I dont really care Whether its fish or fishfingers, But sometimes I am quite particular And want only certain things. Quite some time ago I happened to see the sun rise, It didn't happen very quickly But then I didn't expect it to. I fell asleep before it was fully up, I was quite tired for the rest of the day.
Up the ladder: a prayer for grief
Down the ladder: -=Dark_Angel=- RAP
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4375
Weighted score: 3.6237545
Overall Rank: 13577
Posted: May 15, 2002 9:20 AM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2002 9:20 AM PDT
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[1]... anonymous @ 62.6.144.238 | 15-May-02/9:33 AM | Reply
Jeez, your crap!
[1]... anonymous @ 66.47.71.146 | 15-May-02/1:04 PM | Reply
can't say this did much for me.
[6] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 15-May-02/5:32 PM | Reply
Excellent work. I love the way you carried the theme from the first verse right through the rest of the poem. Cancel that thought.
[8] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.98.27 | 30-Jul-02/8:33 PM | Reply
YOU SAUCY DANUBE MAIDEN
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