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Hurting Heart (Free verse) by faded_twilight I loved you
Why did I love you?
Oh that's right
You were such a nice guy
You tricked me into loving you
Now you have someone new
She loves you
You love her
I'm here all alone
With my thoughts to comfort me
With my razors to comfort me
With my cigarettes, with my liquor
With everything but a lover to comfort me.
I foolishly told you I loved you
I see the good that the admission did
You didn't even act like you cared
Fuck you!
Fuck you because I'm crying over you!
Someone once told me
"The one person worth your tears
Will never make you cry."
You're not worth my tears
You're not worth all of this headache.
You're nothing to me
You're less than nothing
Up the ladder:
Night Ways
Down the ladder:
nation
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Posted: May 13, 2002 11:07 PM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2002 11:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.9325938 Overall Rank: 13422 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.82.103.36
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14-May-02/2:22 AM
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I take it this is the resolution of your last poem? Equally great!
Yeah, you're right! Anyone who doesn't want you just doesn't appreciate how deep and sensitive you are. It's not that they find you ugly, stupid, irritating, self-absorbed, et cetera; it's that they don't understand you, because you have issues. Great poem!
The crying shall not cease. the action just turns inevitably invisible.y
hey i give you props girly.... i love it man oh man i love it....... cus i been there and you know what jim, jack, and jose are always around ... fuck guys get some liquor!
ps i really did like the line " the one person worth your tears will never make you cry" ~~~~~ 10~~~~~~ peace out 365 view(s)
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