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Hurting Heart (Free verse) by faded_twilight

I loved you Why did I love you? Oh that's right You were such a nice guy You tricked me into loving you Now you have someone new She loves you You love her I'm here all alone With my thoughts to comfort me With my razors to comfort me With my cigarettes, with my liquor With everything but a lover to comfort me. I foolishly told you I loved you I see the good that the admission did You didn't even act like you cared Fuck you! Fuck you because I'm crying over you! Someone once told me "The one person worth your tears Will never make you cry." You're not worth my tears You're not worth all of this headache. You're nothing to me You're less than nothing

SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:08 PM
hey i give you props girly.... i love it man oh man i love it....... cus i been there and you know what jim, jack, and jose are always around ... fuck guys get some liquor!
ps i really did like the line " the one person worth your tears will never make you cry" ~~~~~ 10~~~~~~
peace out




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