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nation (Free verse) by roses are read
we are a nation on. our knees i stand spread open i am ready to be crucified nail me to your cross splintered trailer park boards because in god we trust standing on the lee ward side father, friend, foe, driving each nail in my blood runs tracks like tears across my face my finger with not push you death (unwilling) i have died a nation has fainted.
Up the ladder: Hurting Heart
Down the ladder: Enslaved
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.9047618
Weighted score: 3.9244611
Overall Rank: 13423
Posted: April 5, 2002 7:14 AM PST; Last modified: April 5, 2002 7:14 AM PST
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[4] nrevatehtni @ | 10-Apr-02/8:35 AM | Reply
what are you talking about?
[5] nentwined @ | 10-May-02/9:33 AM | Reply
except for the top three lines, this reads backwards very nicely (perhaps better)?

all in all, though, I don't get it.
[1] Holden @ 195.92.67.71 | 22-Jul-02/1:29 PM | Reply
Weird ??
[3] Frass @ 138.88.128.156 | 31-Jul-02/5:23 PM | Reply
Spasms of creativity; get it together, roses.
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