Fighting Peacefully.

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 5 comments

Float through my mind sail across my eyes let me breathe you in. bathe in my thoughts and bask in the sunlight of my dreams let me protect you. You move through the darkness like silk in the wind and when the moonlight strikes you upon your face I can see the scars of your life Let me touch you like you have never been touched before I promise to be gentle and I'll pretend that I don't see how you ache for the other side of life. I'm not like the wind I can't push you around. but I will take you out from underneath your rock let me protect you. I won't be around forever so take me now.

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[2] anonymous 11-May-02/1:18 PM Reply

I think Michael Bolton has a song like this. Or maybe it was Enya.

[2] anonymous 15-May-02/2:53 PM Reply

try fighting those cliches.....peace!

[1] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-May-02/5:25 PM Reply

I suggest that all poems containing the following words be deleted: dusk, dawn, moonlight, sunlight, sunsets, dew, mist and wind (unless preceded by the word break)

[7] Angel_of_fait 9-Jul-02/7:37 PM Reply

very good alot of thought went into this i can tell that this poem is based on true life am i wrong?

[5] New Life Drug 6-Sep-02/4:18 PM Reply

oxymoron. haha