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Fighting Peacefully. (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
Float through my mind
sail across my eyes
let me breathe you in.
bathe in my thoughts
and bask in the sunlight
of my dreams
let me protect you.
You move through the darkness
like silk in the wind
and when the moonlight strikes you
upon your face
I can see the scars
of your life
Let me touch you
like you have never
been
touched before
I promise
to be gentle
and I'll pretend that
I don't see
how you ache
for the other side
of life.
I'm not like the wind
I can't push you around.
but I will take
you out
from underneath
your rock
let me protect you.
I won't be around forever
so take me now.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0625
Weighted score: 5.05505
Overall Rank: 6813
Posted: May 11, 2002 11:34 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 11:34 AM PDT
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