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Snake (Yin) (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
I only have scales And this two part tongue (with mouth) To paint heaven's gate.

Up the ladder: Naylor's Handbag
Down the ladder: Fighting Peacefully.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.111111
Weighted score: 5.0555553
Overall Rank: 6760
Posted: November 2, 2004 4:50 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2004 4:50 PM PST
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[0] IcHronit @ 168.28.203.194 | 4-Nov-04/2:16 PM | Reply
I only have shells
and rest is pittiful
to dream about this place

blah blah. whatever. this haiku is nice. but it sucks. is beautiful too. but it lacks the quality of nature. So i think is great. But really is bad and stupid.
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