Snake (Yin)

by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Nov 2004 · 1 comment

I only have scales And this two part tongue (with mouth) To paint heaven's gate.

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[0] IcHronit 4-Nov-04/2:16 PM Reply

I only have shells
and rest is pittiful
to dream about this place

blah blah. whatever. this haiku is nice. but it sucks. is beautiful too. but it lacks the quality of nature. So i think is great. But really is bad and stupid.