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Snake (Yin) (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos I only have scales
And this two part tongue (with mouth)
To paint heaven's gate.
Up the ladder:
Naylor's Handbag
Down the ladder:
Fighting Peacefully.
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Posted: November 2, 2004 4:50 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2004 4:50 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0555553 Overall Rank: 6809 Comments:
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and rest is pittiful
to dream about this place
blah blah. whatever. this haiku is nice. but it sucks. is beautiful too. but it lacks the quality of nature. So i think is great. But really is bad and stupid.