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that boy

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 6 comments

that boy is my anthem my loud music my crazy dance. who cares what anyone else thinks! I'm having so much fun dancing in the road in the rain lungs filled with my favorite radio song. that boy smiles at me and joins me in the street bare feet on the sparkling pavement. who cares if we should be asleep! I'm having so much fun... that boy is my wild music my shower song, my insane tango. and boy, that boy can dance!

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[n/a] deleted user 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

I really like this poem. It needs a little work , but good job. Much better than "Fear".

[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

cool. =) I was really hoping it would end with something like "boy, that boy can dance!" =) I'd prefer how it read if the exclamation marks were question marks... not much else to say. cool. :)

[10] anonymous 10-Sep-01/4:33 AM Reply

such a youthfull exhuberence!

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-May-02/1:28 AM Reply

If this was any more cheery and trite I would explode.

[n/a] anagram 17-Aug-02/4:46 PM Reply

Lets try using the correct fingers the next time I try to write HUMOUROUS (UK)

[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/5:44 AM Reply

Simplisticaand quite normal, but yet lovely and wholesome, and american. I hear Mellencamp singing "pink houses" already.