poemranker ::Thoughts by Mistaya

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Free verse № 2648

Thoughts

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Jun 2002 · 1 comment

Love, a soft kiss and a tentative touch Time spent thinking, dreaming of someone A touch given, something never felt before Feelings aroused by thoughts and memories A shiver, rush of emotions accompany a glance Heat of passion from a tentative touch Few words describe this feeling Endless thoughts remember it Emotions rise strong All else is lost, a void Pressing weight Heavy with memory And a soft smile closely follows Reaching out to touch Fingertips brush skin Slowing leaning in Soft kiss on waiting lips These ignite Griping emotion Memories Shivers of anticipation Longing to feel again

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[6] Amythest 1-Jun-02/7:45 PM Reply
Very descriptive,...pretty nice :)