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Thoughts (Free verse) by Mistaya
Love, a soft kiss and a tentative touch
Time spent thinking, dreaming of someone
A touch given, something never felt before
Feelings aroused by thoughts and memories
A shiver, rush of emotions accompany a glance
Heat of passion from a tentative touch
Few words describe this feeling
Endless thoughts remember it
Emotions rise strong
All else is lost, a void
Pressing weight
Heavy with memory
And a soft smile closely follows
Reaching out to touch
Fingertips brush skin
Slowing leaning in
Soft kiss on waiting lips
These ignite
Griping emotion
Memories
Shivers of anticipation
Longing to feel again
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1
Weighted score: 5.05
Overall Rank: 6820
Posted: June 1, 2002 4:56 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2002 4:56 PM PDT
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