A Storm For Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Jun 2002 · 3 comments

something heard and felt for me chased this heavy sky and lent it's voice when mine was mute static buzz trailing razor talons relentless fury breaking, shaking this feeble ground something heard...and felt for me chilled me to my core tonight i'm small but not alone something heard...and felt for me

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[5] nentwined 12-Jun-02/12:36 AM Reply

(it's == it is; its == possessive)

cute. I like the dark tint to it; think you could develop that.

[6] harrytuttle 19-Jul-02/7:31 AM Reply

dark, but nice.

[0] New Life Drug 31-Jul-02/10:58 AM Reply

Your poem reminds me of a trailer park. I guess you could take that as a negative thing.