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A Storm For Me (Free verse) by KatieKaBoom something heard and felt for me
chased this heavy sky
and lent it's voice when mine was mute
static buzz
trailing razor talons
relentless fury
breaking, shaking this feeble ground
something heard...and felt for me
chilled me to my core
tonight i'm small but not alone
something heard...and felt for me
Up the ladder:
Thoughts
Down the ladder:
And they both knew
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Posted: June 11, 2002 1:54 PM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2002 1:54 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.05 Overall Rank: 6818 Comments:
dark, but nice.
Your poem reminds me of a trailer park. I guess you could take that as a negative thing.
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cute. I like the dark tint to it; think you could develop that.