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A Storm For Me (Free verse) by KatieKaBoom

something heard and felt for me chased this heavy sky and lent it's voice when mine was mute static buzz trailing razor talons relentless fury breaking, shaking this feeble ground something heard...and felt for me chilled me to my core tonight i'm small but not alone something heard...and felt for me

nentwined 12-Jun-02/12:36 AM
(it's == it is; its == possessive)

cute. I like the dark tint to it; think you could develop that.




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